First Draft

Here is the first draft of our shopping documentary. There are still some tweaks that need to be made, which includes the audio. This involves making sure that you can hear the interview answers over the top of the background non-diegetic music, filming voiceovers for the questions for the interviews, because these are quite fuzzy right now. We can do this by using a high-quality microphone and filming the questions in a sound proof room, with no sound in the background.
More improvements to be made are inputting more statistics, changing the size of the ones already in there, and inputting some more interview clips and making the overall documentary up to five minutes. We also need to put some more credits in.
However, despite the improvements that need to be made, I am very happy with the overall product. With putting all of the clips together, I feel that it is a very effective, informative documentary. We have found a good soundtrack that works well in the background of the documentary, which is lighthearted, fitting the conventions and tone of the documentary well. This makes it overall a good start, because it is all grouped together well.