After discussion with my teacher, it has been decided that some amendments should be made to my documentary in order to boost the quality of the video. After the discussion with my teacher and the feedback below, I have decided the amendments that need to be made to this documentary are a narrative, which will add to the structure of the documentary. If we film someone involved with the interviews and show them in their home environment, it will give more of a personal feel to the film. After reviewing the feedback, the main downfall was that it lacked something more personal. This will hopefully give it the touch that it needs.
Below is the feedback for the documentary.
Do you find this documentary relatable?
Yes: 8 No: 2
Do you think its effective in being a social documentary?
Yes: 7 No: 3
Do you think it needs to be improved?
Yes: 4 No: 6
Do you feel like it needs more of a personal tint on it?
Yes: 6 No: 4
Would you watch this again?
Yes: 7 No: 3
Would you recommend your friends and family to watch this?
Yes: 8 No: 2
When asked more open ended questions, the audience feedback (target audience) tended to say that they found the content relatable as the characters within the documentary are fairly young. However, they said that it lacked some sort of a structure. Over the next few weeks, we will refilm and add this
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